Friday, January 23, 2015

Writing Practice for IELTS Test, "Pie Chart Report"

 

There are plenty of food advertisements in TV. In this writing, almost 90% of unhealthy food advertisements play role on TV's commercial. Based on the pie chart, there are wide types of advertised foods.

Unhealthy foods were the number one ruled of TV advertising in 2005. They made contribution for 89% of the total. The highest one is Candy and Snacks advertisements. They made up for 34% of total for unhealthy foods. Followed by them, Sugared Cereal contributed just fewer than 30% of unhealthy foods advertising. Moreover, Fast-food, Dine-in restaurants and soda-soft drinks contributed for 26% collectively.

Healthy foods were advertised just above 10% from the total of TV advertising in the same year. Fruit juices made up the least; they only made contribution for one percent of the healthy food ads. Diary and prepared foods made equal percentage on TV advertising. Both of them contributed for 8% collectively. The last 2% was made up by breads and pastries.

Note:
In addition to make the report properly for academic writing, there are a few things that you have to know, they are:
In chart writing (Pie chart and Graphs), the overall trends are must be written whether they put in first or last paragraph. However, the best location is in the first paragraph after the main clause.
The best number of paragraph in chart writings are three paragraphs. They are first paragraph for Introduction and Overall Trends. And then followed by second paragraph as first body paragraph that describes the most/ highest/ or biggest. Finally, the third paragraph as second body paragraph describes the least/ lowest/ or smallest.
The overall trends are the explanation of the chart with comprehensive understanding. It starts from the comparison and contrasting from the data which are shown
This article is not fully correct because this is only my writing practice. 

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